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Sunday 4 February 2018

EP 10: PYRAMIDS NEED RENOVATION| EP10 ACROSS NILE IN 11TH CENTURY| A TIME TRAVEL STORY

‘This way,’ the chief robber pointed towards the dark lobby.  Suffocation and deep smell held their breath as soon as they started off. A mysterious quietness was overpowering the gloomy way. Hassan felt his feet swamping in the sand. The footprints of pharos were departed in kaput bricks in their way.
‘We have nothing while alive and King Khufu constructed this giant and enormous pyramid as his burial place’ one of the robber said.
 ‘Pharos believed in life after death, so they buried their nobles with treasures and slaves. After all he was an authoritative king. His interment deserved this,’ the chief robber looked angry.
 ‘I’m feeling drowsy after looking at the lot of puzzled ways and lobbies here. It would take a long to search for each other. What if we lost in these cursed riddles,’ the first robber was reluctant to go forward.
‘Hey silly, a man with more than one wife should learn from this structure to hide him from them. He made three separate pyramids for his wives and kept the fourth one with him in hope to enjoy his second life with her,’ the chief mocked at him.
PHARAOHS WILL RENOVATE THE PYRAMID FIRST

‘If he would ever wake up again, for sure he would die of suffocation and smell again,’ Hassan was still trying to adapt the atmosphere.
‘Don’t worry, he would order the renovation at once and will shift to any luxury hotel meanwhile. “Many stories pyramids, hanging on the pointed edge of each other. How they rose up to sky. There construction is still a mystery.” Next generations will make inquiries on it,’ Murtaza’s mind architect the future pyramids.

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stones of  a bracelet and space asteroids are inter linked
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‘He must be talking about any one of the future scientists Zaka or sigma,’ Hassan whispered to Murtaza.  
‘I found this book during my robbery in one of the pyramids. It tells about the precious gold bracelet, which was lost in Khufu’s period. I’m sure that man was talking about the same bracelet. Look at the maps and drawings here. They are going to help us to get over this maze. I do not believe in him but this book. Now don’t waste time and move forward,’ the chief put that book back in his gown.
‘We found and sell many remains of chariots, games and other artifacts during my robberies in pyramids but we could never find any gold from here. A queen would not be buried along with this bracelet alone.’ Greed got dense in the eyes of a second robber.

A DECAYED STAIR CASE
‘Stop,’ chief stopped at an intersection.
‘Look for a staircase here,’ he ordered.
They all lit there lanterns. After digging from side, diminish signs of a staircase were apparent.
‘Descend and make our way,’ one robber pulled Murtaza.
‘No, it’s dangerous,’ Hassan screamed at once.
‘Ok, then you takes this turn. What do you think, are you on recreational trip?’ that robber dragged Hassan.
                      ‘Now decide among you, if its difficult then let me decide,’ the chief pushed them from behind. Murtaza hardly managed his balance and held Hassan from falling. A great noise of falling bricks broke the quietness. They closed their eyes for a while and hardly opened again after believing that they were safe at least at first stair.
The staircase seemed ready to hold them. The robbers were following them carefully. Huge shadows were crawling with them in the dim light of lanterns. Screeching sounds of falling pieces of stairs were creating a horrid panorama but they were advancing quietly.

TERMITE CRAWLED THEIR BODIES       
‘Leave my feet,’ Hassan’s screams blocked their feet.
 ‘Some insects are crawling down. They are stirring up on my body rapidly,’ 
‘Deadly, stinging termites are all around,’ one of the robber cried after feeling itching on his body. In no time those tiny monsters attacked them from all sides.
                     ‘Run fast, they’ll left behind,’ the chief robber loped fast following the others.
The tattered Stair case could not bear their loping and started to fall.  They all started to roll on falling stairs. Lanterns fell deep down and went off after struggling with the soaring sand. Now they had no hope of their endurance.
‘Hold the ropes,’ one robber was able to throw some ropes randomly. Hassan was falling too fast that he had no chance to take any support. He felt himself falling down fast like any stone, which tumble down from top and shattered at bottom.
CALL HASSAN ON DINNER
                         ‘Zeemal, haven’t you called at Murtaza side for your brother? Your father is also waiting for him at dinner,’ Hassan’s mother entered the room.
‘Can you get off from this shit at any time? Are you listening at me?’ she snatched her mobile.
‘Please mama, one last message,’ Zeemal protested but stopped after looking at her mother leaving the room.
‘I’m not his servant to look him. He’ll come by his own. I know they both must be playing video games,’ Zeemal sat on the dinning chair.


I GOT IT
                    ‘Oh yes, I found very important clue. Pharaohs used these types of stones in their jewelry. This rock traveled from Egypt to Pakistan, because of the movements of plate in the mantle. But how this stone can have the characteristics of space stones? It is still a mystery’ Hassan’s father was looking at the book.
‘I’ll share this with my team tomorrow,’ he also came for dinner.
‘I think I should call myself,’ Hassan’s mother dialed Murtaza’s mother mobile…..

to be continued
to enjoy the story from first episode just click the link:
disclaimer: all characters of the story are imaginary. they bear no resemblance to anyone living or dead.Enjoy and get lost in videos, saved in space pockets from past and future. Five class fellow went on time travel adventures with the aid of a scientist Zaka, from 24th century and sometimes they replaced with the real characters of past to hype the excitement.Other stories of the series are:
  1.  ACROSS THE NILE
  2. MY BEACON FUTURE HOUSE
  3. THE MUGHAL ECLIPSE
  4. PRITHVI VS GHAURI 
  5. MY GUILTY STYLE
Why not enjoy a fearless novel of a Pakistani sniper lady doctor at Karachi operation, a brave commando at Wazirastan operation Zarb e Azab and an irritated and scared Chinese engineer working in Pakistan
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disclaimer: all characters in the story are fictitious. they bear no resemblance with anyone living or dead.
about author: saima nadeem is an educationist & a story writer

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